Monday, 16 May 2016

jenny and the fairies part 1

One day dare was a girl named jenny and she was hiding from her friends and she found a door  that looked like a cave and she found a key and she unlocked the door and she saw a world full of faeries and there was a lolly tornado
And hided and she saw a cassell and she saw a red faerie and jenny ran and there was lots and lots of faeriesScreenshot 2016-05-17 at 12.30.02.png

1 comment:

  1. Hi Joshua, what an interesting story! I like how you have used some powerful words like "she saw a world full of faeries". Have you double checked that you have full stops and capital letters in the right places?
    Miss Ashley

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