Wednesday, 14 September 2016

walking to school

It was a glorious morning the sun was out the birds was twittering the 3 girls names were maera bridget and pam they were jogging on the dark concert and  they came to a dangerous  bridge was falling down  people got injured'' how are we going to get home now'' i think we can't then let's go home but we don't know the way home'' let's go to school how do you see that suhoor over there yes we're going in'' i'm not sure
 about that'' it's the only way home''ok'' let's go  we're here at the school we did it!!!! be quiet!. there's a teacher'' and she took us home the end

1 comment:

  1. Oh my goodness Joshua, you have used lots of powerful words which make your story so interesting.. glorious.. twittering.. dangerous..
    And you have lots of dialogue with speech marks. Just amazing Joshua!
    I am so proud of you for trying your best to get this story done. You produce amazing stories when you work hard at them!