Monday, 24 October 2016

Evidence of writing

We did a practice test, and our teachers gave us feedback. Here is my writing.

Wednesday, 12 October 2016

charlie and the chocolate factory

Little charlie came on his bike to a shop nearby he got a wonka bar in it he saw a golden ticket mum dad i found a GOLDEN TICKET! it said hello and greetings to you all it is me willy wonka i shake you warmly by the hand i have sent five golden tickets for you it is monday 10 sharp don’t be late.’’ we went to the chocolate factory and we saw oompa loompas and there was a room and everything was made of chocolate and every one was sent home except me and mr wonka asked me if i want to live with him but i couldn't leave my family so we all lived in the chocolate factory the end.

Tuesday, 11 October 2016

the time machine

the lost boy

I got in my car and we went to kfc and we crashed and my parents died i was homeless for one week and all i had was a feijoa and a apple i went to the hospital they were nice they gave me food i saw a time machine and i went to the past when me and my parents was on the road  and dad before the crash and i stopped my mum and dad from going to kfc and i fall off a building so i went to the hospital and my heart stopped’’ not on my watch the doctor said CLEAR!!! And i jolted the end