dream world theme park crash

theme park

Evidence of writing

We did a practice test, and our teachers gave us feedback. Here is my writing.

the grand bazaar words

school values

Ako learning and teaching

Whanaungatanga caring for others

Manaakitanga relating to others

Rangimarie peace

Tukumarie tolerance

Rangimarie from Tamaki Primary on Vimeo.

my celebration

Charlie and the chocolate factory

Little Charlie came on his bike to a shop nearby, he got a wonka bar in it he saw a golden ticket. mum dad I found a GOLDEN TICKET! it said hello and greetings to you all it is me Willy Wonka I shake you warmly by the hand I have sent five golden tickets for you, come to my factory. It starts monday 10 sharp don’t be late.’’ we went to the chocolate factory and we saw oompa loompas and there was a room and everything was made of chocolate and every one was sent home except me. Mr wonka asked me if I want to live with him but I couldn't leave my family so we all lived in the chocolate factory. the end.

the time machine

the lost boy

I got in my car and we went to kfc and we crashed and my parents died i was homeless for one week and all i had was a feijoa and a apple i went to the hospital they were nice they gave me food i saw a time machine and i went to the past when me and my parents was on the road  and dad before the crash and i stopped my mum and dad from going to kfc and i fall off a building so i went to the hospital and my heart stopped’’ not on my watch the doctor said CLEAR!!! And i jolted the end