Thursday, 30 March 2017

game unit t1w9

me and stanley was making a game it is called murder mystery candy land
we painted it it was fun then we got to play it with miss ashley
that was fun to then we play a different game
called rap we had to rap it was boring then we packed up the end.

Sunday, 26 March 2017

WALT mark our writing

skateboarding got canceledScreenshot 2017-03-27 at 12.07.57.pngso we played line I was 17 then miss ashley said 5 then 5 went zooming off no one won. then next round
Came miss called 3 and they were spending like the flashScreenshot 2017-03-27 at 12.19.32.png room 7 won that round next round. it was almost my turn 5 miss ashley said and we went
It was short that round and i was in it! It was fun but we won it was getting cool because it was 1/1 then the next round came they ran as fast as they can
And we won but when we said good game they punched us Screenshot 2017-03-27 at 12.27.36.png but we won


Marking my story!
Ideas
Structure and Language
Organisation
Vocabulary
Sentence Structure
Spelling
Punctuation
R3
R2
R2
R2
R3
R2
R2
Total score (add the numbers next to the R’s altogether)
16
My E-asttle score is … (click here and see what your score is)
1p

STRUCTURE AND LANGUAGE
STRUCTURE AND LANGUAGE
STRUCTURE AND LANGUAGE

STRUCTURE AND LANGUAGE

Thursday, 16 March 2017

magic box

This morning There was a magic box it was a game miss ashley put something and I have to guess it by feeling it and eating it i was blinded folded it felt weird then i put my hand in it and i said it's weetbix! Hahaha it felt crunchy i had to eat it it was amazing