skateboarding got canceledso we played line I was 17 then miss ashley said 5 then 5 went zooming off no one won. then next round
Came miss called 3 and they were spending like the flash room 7 won that round next round. it was almost my turn 5 miss ashley said and we went
It was short that round and i was in it! It was fun but we won it was getting cool because it was 1/1 then the next round came they ran as fast as they can
And we won but when we said good game they punched us but we won
Marking my story!
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Structure and Language
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Organisation
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Vocabulary
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R3
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R2
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R2
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R2
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R3
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R2
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Total score (add the numbers next to the R’s altogether)
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ReplyDelete-use full stops and capital letters in the right places
- use short sentences for effect
-use more describing words and difficult words
Hi Josh good spelling and good work
ReplyDeletethank you leon yr the best friend ever
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