tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7866948829342546820.post4825682741309600025..comments2023-04-01T01:51:59.137-07:00Comments on Joshua N @ Tamaki Primary School: the invisible manTPSBlogOwner4http://www.blogger.com/profile/00541767221376341453noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7866948829342546820.post-34090279303343348452016-09-19T20:31:25.999-07:002016-09-19T20:31:25.999-07:00OH MY GOODNESS THIS IS SO SCARY!
I love how you h...OH MY GOODNESS THIS IS SO SCARY! <br />I love how you have used lots of interesting and powerful words like guillotine and invisible. They make your story seem real!<br />Next steps - describe your character more in detail. You maybe could explain what his name was, why he lived in the forrest, why he liked killing people, etc.Ashley Schellingerhout (Miss Ashley)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10885496821769466351noreply@blogger.com