tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7866948829342546820.post5912150947575792217..comments2023-04-01T01:51:59.137-07:00Comments on Joshua N @ Tamaki Primary School: jenny and the fairies part 1TPSBlogOwner4http://www.blogger.com/profile/00541767221376341453noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7866948829342546820.post-69383981138780487352016-05-17T00:02:56.669-07:002016-05-17T00:02:56.669-07:00Hi Joshua, what an interesting story! I like how y...Hi Joshua, what an interesting story! I like how you have used some powerful words like "she saw a world full of faeries". Have you double checked that you have full stops and capital letters in the right places?<br />Miss AshleyAshley Schellingerhout (Miss Ashley)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10885496821769466351noreply@blogger.com