One day dare was a girl named jenny and she was hiding from her friends and she found a door that looked like a cave and she found a key and she unlocked the door and she saw a world full of faeries and there was a lolly tornado
And hided and she saw a castle and she saw a red farie and jenny ran and there was lots and lots of faries
Hi Joshua, what an interesting story! I like how you have used some powerful words like "she saw a world full of faeries". Have you double checked that you have full stops and capital letters in the right places?
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