me and stanley was making a game it is called murder mystery candy land
we painted it it was fun then we got to play it with miss ashley
that was fun to then we play a different game
called rap we had to rap it was boring then we packed up the end.
Kia Ora, I am a Year 8 student at Tāmaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Te Puna Wairua a Bi-lingual unit where we speak Māori and English. My teachers are Whaea Lee, Matua Punehu and Matua Andre who is also my Kapa Haka tutor.
Thursday 30 March 2017
Sunday 26 March 2017
WALT mark our writing
skateboarding got canceledso we played line I was 17 then miss ashley said 5 then 5 went zooming off no one won. then next round
Came miss called 3 and they were spending like the flash room 7 won that round next round. it was almost my turn 5 miss ashley said and we went
It was short that round and i was in it! It was fun but we won it was getting cool because it was 1/1 then the next round came they ran as fast as they can
And we won but when we said good game they punched us but we won
Marking my story!
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Ideas
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Structure and Language
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Organisation
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Vocabulary
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Sentence Structure
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Spelling
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Punctuation
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R3
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R2
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R2
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R2
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R3
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R2
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R2
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Total score (add the numbers next to the R’s altogether)
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16
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1p
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STRUCTURE AND LANGUAGE
STRUCTURE AND LANGUAGE
STRUCTURE AND LANGUAGE
STRUCTURE AND LANGUAGE
Tuesday 21 March 2017
Monday 20 March 2017
Thursday 16 March 2017
magic box
This morning There was a magic box it was a game miss ashley put something and I have to guess it by feeling it and eating it i was blinded folded it felt weird then i put my hand in it and i said it's weetbix! Hahaha it felt crunchy i had to eat it it was amazing
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