Monday, 19 September 2016

the invisible man

in the forest there lived a invisible man that had a secret lair  a secret button on one tree that had a password. some people say that the invisible man had killed more than 1000020056 people! and he had 50 guillotines and heads at the bottom of the guillotines he died from hungry blood eating wolves in 1982 the end.
 

1 comment:

  1. OH MY GOODNESS THIS IS SO SCARY!
    I love how you have used lots of interesting and powerful words like guillotine and invisible. They make your story seem real!
    Next steps - describe your character more in detail. You maybe could explain what his name was, why he lived in the forrest, why he liked killing people, etc.

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